For me, the test of whether any internet statement is insulting, trollish, childish, etc, is to imagine if the statement would have still been made face-to-face. A significant number of internet statements fail this test, and badly.
Oh I see. I had not thought of that. The last time I made that mistake I ended up inadvertently downloading a Google toolbar and a stupid free trial of an anti virus software, both of which I did not want. And then go was plagued I unwanted pop ups every 5 x mins!!
Yes, it's happened to most of us. So, your caution was merited
Not bad at all. The mix sounds fine, plus I cna crank this and it still sounds good. I think in the part that starts around the 1:00 mark, the synth is too wide, too loud, and the panning is distracting. I'd pull it back a bit.