There are some nice sounds in there. One of the things that bothers me a lot is for this style we've become accustomed to quite a lot more reverb than you have here. Idk, I feel that it lacks the true atmosphere for this style. I was going to make the comment about a lack of a tonal center of some kind. But now that I think about it, I think if you had a lot more reverb, like some with nice long release trails then any thought of that would diminish. I'd quite like to a hear a version like the aforementioned to compare.
Toward the end it did remind me of Blade Runner, just the style not the notes. Some nice sounds and atmosphere and I think the reverb would enhance the atmosphere more.
Sample Libraries: EWQL Hollywood Strings Diamond, Hollywood Brass Gold, Hollywood Woodwinds Gold, Symphonic Choirs, Silk, Stormdrum 2. Native Instruments Alicia's Keys Piano. All sample libraries at 1 mic position only.
Plugins: QL Spaces, Waves REDD, Waves API-2500, Waves J37/Kramer Tape, iZotope Ozone 5 Basic.