I like heavy stuff and would have anjoyed this a lot more if the lead guitar that came in at 2.05 came in a lot earlier, one can only listen to a heavy metal "backing track" for so long then it gets boring, if that lead guitar came in after 20 secs or so you'd have a very interesting track...
as an aside..the drums sound totally mono on my monitors..dunno if that's what you intended or not,
. Cubase 7 64 bit on W7 intel i7-2700 CPU@3.50GHz, SSD..16GB ram, Yamaha N8, Shure KSM 32 mic,SPL Track one preamp, Nexus, Trilian, Omnisphere, EZ drummer, LASS,8Dio strings, Realitone "the Ladies", Jamstix, Ozone 5 pro, Lexicon PCM, Genelec 8030BPM monitors and Genelec 7050 BPM sub bass,
+ home made soundbooth and too much other stuff+ dog that farts in stereo...