Nice mood from the harmony, though it's so short it doesn't actually go anywhere at all melodically. The main problem with the expression is the lack of. Dynamically it sounds _______ like there are zero changes at all, not even subtle value changes during notes never mind a general shape from start to finish. Maybe there are subtle changes to CC1 and CC11, but it's definitely too flat dynamically overall. Good start though.
Sample Libraries: EWQL Hollywood Strings Diamond, Hollywood Brass Gold, Hollywood Woodwinds Gold, Symphonic Choirs, Silk, Stormdrum 2. Native Instruments Alicia's Keys Piano. All sample libraries at 1 mic position only.
Plugins: QL Spaces, Waves REDD, Waves API-2500, Waves J37/Kramer Tape, iZotope Ozone 5 Basic.