yeh good stuff but like sherz says the vocals are a bit too far back and i think they are beginning to sound like an after thought ,i thought you could have supported the vocal melody better with the other instrumental melody lines ,its like the two didnt belong together at times , we all know that they dont belong together in real life but i thought you could have avoided the clashing melody's .like when your melodys meet michaels , blend yours around mj`s to create a nice harmony or something and eq a bit of daylight to the vocal. apart from that little problem 
soz ,great concept .