Ok worked on the intro and that’s going pretty well. I also shortened the ending.
But the M8’s just not working man, the minor chords from the intro are just bad and the rest of the intro mirrors my main melody too much. Any hints? The main chorus section flows so well into the next section that it’s hard to break up. My main decline is where I drop the hi-hats and break into the tom build section.
Should I forget it or is there something I can do? Please take a closer look man and see what you think. Then I’ll upload what I have so far.