Very nicely done Jonathan…to nitpick a bit here or a bit there would be subjective and futile, this is good by any standards…however !! I think you’ve missed a trick…the end of this fine piece has a beautiful melody that…firstly, should have started the piece, then appear again in another form somewhere in the middle and then at the end as you did, I think this would give more form to a series of dramatic elements…a few restful and melodic intervals along the way would enhance this already excellent piece…maybe the voice you have at the beginning should sing this end melody…( at the beginning)it is a very nice melody…seems a pity not to use it more…in your post you talk a lot about the technical side of stuff, which is important of course, but at the end of the day the average johnny out there,…like me…listens to a good tune and have no idea where the mic should be in an orchestra…Kevin