Didn’t hear the original prior to edits but current arrangement sounds great. The hat might be a bit loud or maybe just 2 much hi end on it. Could be the overhead mic bleed???
I love all the sounds but unfortunately the synth trumpet doesn’t cut it for me. Would be great to hear with a real player, that would put this piece over the top… but I understand expenses and not being able to get players to do this stuff 
Great writing and programing and superb playing!!!
Kenny