Yes, I think this is the right place. I thought you were promoting a new vst plug in with the song title. Nice mix and elements ,sounds like it could be pulled together to be more cohesive.
Wish Steiny would add a music listening section with sub categories for electronic , urban, jazz and traditional rock. A song like this deserves more listens based on its potential and after a while like minded people might flock to specific sections. As the forum has been ,styles apart from traditional rock generally get short shrift from those who hate popular - non rock music or hold commercial music in contempt.