Its always nice to find “quirky” in the constant spew of “normal” out there. I enjoyed, I agree with a few about the overall mix… however, I only listened on the laptop (no time for the studio today), so to be fair, its not a great listening environment. I pay little attention to lyrics, so no complaints like some here.
And, at 1:07, I did a little doubletake, because for a moment you sounded just like Justin Hayward. (google him) 
Deserves a “well done” IMHO.
Cheers