well…your improving for sure…it’s a bit “wordy” and sounds difficult to sing because of this and you need to lay off the piano for at least a few bars during the song, one of my early failings ( one of many) was playing the same instrument all the way through a track without varying said instrument and introducing something else to create more interest.I was thankfully put right by various people on this forum…you really should try a higher key…I’m sure you could do it!!
the song has a jolly and upbeat feel and made me feel happy…so good work and keep at it mate…Kevin