well done pretty good tune ,its got a very folk kinda vibe.you are still using the watch alarm for the solo i see , id maybe try a mandolin sound or a squeeze box or something ,might be more in keeping with the rest of the feel ,i think you have done well with the vocals,although when they are solo`d at the end they sound like you have tried to bend them into shape ,anyway i personally like the lyrics and how you have made them fit rhythmically through the song ,well done.