Overall I like this but was concerned that the attack of the first guitar note is missing, there’s a funny little fade-up instead. It needs to be one thing or the other. Either a long slow fade-in or a proper start to the first note.
I’d put a drop in at 2:18 to let things hang in the air for a moment and then bring in the louder section. I’d like the louder section to be louder and more intense. Really I’d like to hear more changes in dynamics between the different sections of the piece.
…Mike.