I think the core ingredients are pretty good and my ‘producers brain’ is hearing all sorts of potential. It’s sounding all a bit ‘stiff’ and regimented at the moment - for want of a better words, certainly up until the outro anyway. And, I don’ think that drum pattern at 2:00 works so well, but I do get what you were going for. And I get it’s a WIP.
It sure would be interesting to hear Kevin’s on this, though you might have to consider a key change? And, I reckon there’s plenty room for more in the arrangement. Why not post up the lyrics… I’d like to have a read.
