Thank you! That’s why I love putting my stuff up here for feedback. Sometimes the truth stings but it always makes me work harder and improve my sound. Much appreciated Kenny.
I agree, how would ever get better though without critique from those around us. From what I hear in your stuff, you should never be stung. 
Can’t wait to hear more (hope you don’t mind I sent this to my kid because I thought she’d love it). This is how things go viral lol and 
you need a world class video for it