Like the song but the mix sounds a little bit “honky” maybe you should get your eq out and have a search around for the offending frequency and zap it a bit.
also IMHO the mix seems very busy and your vox often becomes buried.
the instruments seem to be fighting each other for a slice of the song, see if you can put each instrument in it’s own frequency “space” so they don’t argue with each other because they are drowning the vox…
song has real commercial potential and is worth sorting out…just my opinion for what it’s worth.
Kevin