Love the piano, smells of Alicia keys to me. So much dynamic contrast and things coming at me, I couldn’t help but listen on. The transitions and busy mix were both pulled off very smoothly, probably not how I would have handled it but it definitely works, and very well at that.
The vocalist (you maybe?) is very talented but hard to hear what is actually being said. Maybe you could post the lyrics up? I know you didn’t write lyrics but the line “sharing our food and tears” hit me weird. Perhaps ‘meals’ instead of ‘food’ would fit the style a bit better.
All in all, I hate critiquing your work the same way I do a commercial artist’s. There’s never anything to be improved. Always just end up listening and enjoying it. 