i did catch the sense of a story and it did let my imagination run away somewhere, i say u got the vibe on this, and i hear you when do not worry about length, i like that. just say if this was done by someone else it would sound different, arranged differently etc. but this sounds original even though i have not listened to your other tracks. i can imagine the vibe and feel of them. i think basically what im trying to say is that you seem to have put a unique style on it. good work
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