I think the opening hook is cool and the rhythm of the guitar and/or synths complement it nicely too. The writing is also good and enjoyable. However, and don’t take this next comment too personally, but the vocal performance just sounds a bit too dull overall and the enunciation just isn’t good enough by a long shot. I really have trouble discerning the actual words/syllables a lot of the time and that’s just down to the performance not the recording/mix. It’s certainly not a bad vocal, but I feel it does let the writing/hook down.
Other than those things I think the song is pretty cool!