thanks for your input Jonathan, always appreciated .
the singing if thats what you want to call it was me. sorry about the enunciation, thats a combination of trying to hide rubbish words and my crooked front teeth . i need a brace fitting and need to sit down and write more interesting storys(words). anyway ive added a new mix ,it isnt that different but i am trying to make it a bit easier on the ear sonically without losing dynamics ,i dont know really what i`m talking about .