Well done TC and welcome to the forum.
I just had a listen to your piece.
I like the Synth Sweep at the beginning !!
I was trying to anticipate what the TIME SIGNATURE was before the Drums came in. I was surprised it was in 3/4 !!
If you want a small crtiticism, then my only one would be the placements of the SNARE DRUM. From memory, I think you had them mostly on BEAT ONE (which can sound very 'stiff'). Try placing on BEAT 1+1/2 and on BEAT 3. It should 'loosen' up the feel and give it almost a slight 'Jazz Waltz' lilt (which I think would suit the song).
Nice work mate !!
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