Hey Kevin,
As always wanted to stop by and share my impressions. I like the drums and instrumentation sounds great as does your voice, you really got the drums sounding natural this time. The experimental stuff was really neat too, and worked quite well I think.
As far as the hum at the beginning and throughout, it seemed that the gasps for breath were a bit conspicuous and made it choppy. Maybe you could bounce it and attenuate since you’re using a VST for this. I would also add more reverb on the hum to the point of being an effect in order to help it float (romantic, sexy, etc. you see where I’m going 
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