Aloha S,
I’ve got so much to learn!
A beautiful place to be.
Nice groove.
IMHO
1-(as Jrace posted) A lil less reverb on the drums.
2-Bring the guitar forward a bit in the mix.
3-The crash cymbal every two bars is a bit much.
Try every four or eight bars for the crash.
4-More more. We want more! 
Good Luck!
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