0:00 - Guitar sounds good, just a few dB too loud. Vocal is boxy and doesn’t cut thru the mix (cut mud and boost 1.5-4k ; not the entire range, just where the ‘power lies’. might need to SC and/or scoop the same feq. the acous. rrhythm guitar for the vocal to have a spot
0:30 - Flat vocal note
0:40 - The bass sounds out of tune? Or is it the guitar. The kick needs a little ‘weight’ to it. A little roominess on the drums might help the vibe
0:58 - Same thing about the male vocal applies to the female lead vocal. I think a short reverb and/or delay would really help here too
1:59: Great drummer, but those toms are up a little too much.
~2:15: Something in that acoustic guitar is causing my ears to fatigue. Attenuating that freq. will probably help bring out the vocals. Add some space too it too, to give it some more texture if you find that attenuating the hi-freq takes away some of the ‘prettiness’
all IMO, obvious. You already did the majority of the work, as the rhythm section and the guitar are mostly there.