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Post by Masoomi » Fri Mar 03, 2017 9:02 pm

Hello All

I spend about 28 hours on this project and I'd like to know your view!
Track length is 3:59
Thanks for your time

Plugins:
Addictive Piano
Harmless
Harmor
Ethnic world 5
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Effects:
Delay
Reverb
Equaliser
Distortion


Here's the link:
https://hearthis.at/mohammad-masoomi-9j/saint-rogue/


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Post by Strophoid » Tue Mar 14, 2017 10:34 am

Very nice atmospheric intro. I like the mix, and the buildup up dynamics back and forth is nice.
I'd personally like some variation on the theme though, the track is stuck on the same 2 chords, a change there would make it more interesting.
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Post by Masoomi » Thu Mar 16, 2017 1:53 pm

Strophoid wrote:Very nice atmospheric intro. I like the mix, and the buildup up dynamics back and forth is nice.
I'd personally like some variation on the theme though, the track is stuck on the same 2 chords, a change there would make it more interesting.
I kind of knew that in the back of my mind and you helped to make it bold ! I'll have to ponder on the best melody change for a while ... Thanks mate!
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Post by polgara » Sat Mar 18, 2017 3:33 am

Hi Massoomi ,like strophoid says it has a great atmosphere and the mix sounds really good to me ,the rhythm of the keyboard sounded complex but i don`t know if that was intentional .
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Post by Early21 » Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:52 pm

The atmosphere is built up very nicely, but I too had trouble understanding how the piano rhythm fit in when it first came in. Anyway, it's a good one, and keep them coming!
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Post by Masoomi » Mon Mar 20, 2017 10:10 pm

polgara wrote:Hi Massoomi ,like strophoid says it has a great atmosphere and the mix sounds really good to me ,the rhythm of the keyboard sounded complex but i don`t know if that was intentional .
well it was kind of jazzy in the way that I played it once and then tried to change the quantized notes as little as possible. so do you like the rhuythm or not ? :?:
Early21 wrote:The atmosphere is built up very nicely, but I too had trouble understanding how the piano rhythm fit in when it first came in. Anyway, it's a good one, and keep them coming!
I'll try to keep them coming :) Thanks... perhaps I didn't make a good intro cause the keys were written before the intro and I was trying to make the voices more familiar after the keyboard starts by the means of that intro

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Post by polgara » Tue Mar 21, 2017 2:19 am

Masoomi wrote: well it was kind of jazzy in the way that I played it once and then tried to change the quantized notes as little as possible. so do you like the rhuythm or not ? :?:
on listening again ,it sounds good actually.
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Post by Masoomi » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:14 pm

polgara wrote:
Masoomi wrote: well it was kind of jazzy in the way that I played it once and then tried to change the quantized notes as little as possible. so do you like the rhuythm or not ? :?:
on listening again ,it sounds good actually.
Thanks ... always heart warming when a fellow music lover says I like your tune :)

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Post by Masoomi » Tue Apr 18, 2017 8:30 pm

Thanks to everyone that answered this thread...

I changed my piece a bit:
- added a reversed piano effect at the beginning to get the listener ready
- added a piano arpeggio after the first half of the song to add variation

I'd love to here your voice on this again.

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https://hearthis.at/mohammad-masoomi-9j ... ogue9/IHj/

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Post by Early21 » Wed Apr 19, 2017 12:01 am

Hi Masoomi, just now I tried to play it, but I was unable to get it to play at the link you posted. I don't have any idea why, but Soundcloud usually works, could you put it there as well?
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Post by Masoomi » Wed Apr 19, 2017 7:44 am

Early21 wrote:Hi Masoomi, just now I tried to play it, but I was unable to get it to play at the link you posted. I don't have any idea why, but Soundcloud usually works, could you put it there as well?
Hi,
For some reason soundcloud is filtered here and I was too lazy to use anti-filter :mrgreen:
Thanks for the heads up!

https://soundcloud.com/m_masoomi/saint-rogue

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Post by Early21 » Fri Apr 21, 2017 12:36 am

Hi Masoomi, I still like it a lot! When the piano comes in, the rhythm is nebulous, which leads to some confusion on where it's going. I think I get it now. But maybe you want to quantize or otherwise straighten out the rhythm where the piano enters? Everything else seems to be tightly aligned with the rhythm grid. In any case, there's so much to appreciate in this mix.
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Post by Masoomi » Tue Apr 25, 2017 9:56 pm

Early21 wrote:Hi Masoomi, I still like it a lot! When the piano comes in, the rhythm is nebulous, which leads to some confusion on where it's going. I think I get it now. But maybe you want to quantize or otherwise straighten out the rhythm where the piano enters? Everything else seems to be tightly aligned with the rhythm grid. In any case, there's so much to appreciate in this mix.
Thanks Bro... I agreed with you and tried and changed it a little ... hope it hag gotten better!
https://soundcloud.com/m_masoomi/saint-rogue-1

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Post by Early21 » Tue Apr 25, 2017 11:25 pm

Making more sense to me now. Nice job!
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