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Instrumental.

Post by Renewal » Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:46 pm

Jazzy instrumental song, love to hear your comments.

http://soundcloud.com/re-de-n/traveller-demo

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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Mr M » Mon Aug 20, 2012 10:57 pm

Good playing here especially as it gets to the 4:00 point. Only main critique is that the drums are way too far back in the mix and since you're going for a real drummer sound the drum parts should be flushed out to include drum fills that would drive the energy. The first change was different for me but I'm not that sophisticated.
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Early21 » Tue Aug 21, 2012 3:07 am

Reminds me of Soft Machine. I like it! Agree with Mr M's comments, and would add that the bass sounds a little lost sometimes, especially around 4 minutes.
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Renewal » Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:02 pm

Thanks for the comments guys, I'll look into the suggestions.

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Re: Instrumental.

Post by kzarider » Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:02 pm

Nice tune +1 on drum thing, the bass is a bit muddy also. Looking forward to hearing next mix. The synth sounds are nice what did you use?
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Renewal » Tue Aug 28, 2012 9:45 am

kzarider wrote:Nice tune +1 on drum thing, the bass is a bit muddy also. Looking forward to hearing next mix. The synth sounds are nice what did you use?
Thanks kzarider, working on drums and bass now.
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by bluebob » Tue Aug 28, 2012 1:15 pm

nice!! diggin the chorusy stereo spread on the guitar, beautiful flowing sound. ya loving this track, bit of phantom navigator coming through.
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Post by Renewal » Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:52 pm

bluebob wrote:nice!! diggin the chorusy stereo spread on the guitar, beautiful flowing sound. ya loving this track, bit of phantom navigator coming through.
great talent here!
Thanks bluebob, much appreciated! :D

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Re: Instrumental.

Post by shadowfax » Wed Sep 05, 2012 11:54 am

very laid back and sultry..look forward to hearing a vocal on it..Kevin
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Renewal » Thu Sep 06, 2012 12:01 pm

shadowfax wrote:very laid back and sultry..look forward to hearing a vocal on it..Kevin
Thanks shadowfax, laid back is what I intended to get.
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by twilightsong » Sat Sep 22, 2012 7:20 am

where did it go?
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Renewal » Sat Sep 22, 2012 7:42 pm

twilightsong wrote:where did it go?
Something went wrong when putting a new version on SC, tomorrow another try.
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Renewal » Sun Sep 23, 2012 5:00 pm

http://soundcloud.com/re-de-n/traveller

New version with more drumfills and bass changed.
All comments welcome!

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René
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Re: Instrumental.

Post by HornForHire » Tue Sep 25, 2012 5:46 pm

Hi René,

Sounds good, nice mood. 8-)
I didn't hear the first version, but I think the drums are still a bit too far back in the mix.

Nice guitar sound.

Cheers,
Wim

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Re: Instrumental.

Post by Renewal » Tue Sep 25, 2012 9:50 pm

HornForHire wrote:Hi René,

Sounds good, nice mood. 8-)
I didn't hear the first version, but I think the drums are still a bit too far back in the mix.

Nice guitar sound.

Cheers,
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