Nicely done, just a mixing taste comment, I don’t know the genre at all so this may be exactly how it’s supposed to sound, the drums could do with a bit more room sound to gel them into the mix and perhaps sidechain and duck the snare 1-2db behind the main vocal - which also needs to come up slightly or set up a distortion send on the vocal, parallel mix it to add some fizz at the top end to cut through the mix.
(edit) sounds counter-intuitive (to bringing the vocal forward) but after bringing the vocal forward I’ll also set a high and low-passed send to the same room verb as the drums to add a sense of being in the same room.